Essential Education

Essential Education 

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After-school clubs, sports and activities outside the classroom have been proven to help a student perform better academically and socially.

The Classroom

Have been

 After

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After-school clubs, sports and activities

After-school clubs, sports and activities

2.

Private and international schools make it a priority to offer a wide array of extracurricular activities accessible to all students, regardless of inclination and performance.

Private and international schools

Make

·         To offer

·         of extracurricular

·         of inclination

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Private and international

3.

Although there are parents who can be averse to their children spending too much time engaging in sports, performing arts, community work and art, education experts are stating that varying a learner's experience from a young age can improve their academic, social and emotional mindsets.

Parents

Are

·         From a young age

·         to their children

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·         engaging in sports, performing arts, community work and art

·         can improve their academic, social and emotional mindsets.

4.

Sports help refine a young person's motor skills and cognitive functions, ensuring that these develop on track and maximally.

Sports

Help

On track

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motor skills and cognitive functions

5.

Don't worry about bruises and bumps — children are designed to recover quickly from injuries.

Children

Are

To recover

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bruises and bumps

6.

This also teaches them resilience, to get up and try again, and the importance of teamwork in the case of sports or projects.

This

teaches

Of teamwork

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·         to get up and try again

·         teamwork in the case of sports or projects

7.

Furthermore, sports and out-of-classroom activities are powerful learning experiences where students can develop their passions, motivation and time management.

Students

can

Of classroom

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-

·         Furthermore, sports and out-of-classroom activities

·         passions, motivation and time management.

8.

These are perfect opportunities for young people to practice and hone a variety of skills in a casual environment as they go through the different levels of education and eventually the working world.

These

Are

·         For young people to practice

·         in a casual

·         of skills

·         of education

 

casual environment as they go through the different levels

·         practice and hone

·         education and eventually the working world.

9.

Observe an extracurricular club's meetings and activities and you'll notice the immense amount of interpersonal communication and leadership play that take place.

An extracurricular club

Is

Of interpesonal

Observe an extracurricular club's meetings and activities...

and you'll notice the immense amount of interpersonal communication and leadership play that take place

·         Meetings and activities

·         Interpersonal communication and leadership

10.

Modern-day educational research vouches for EQ and resilience in the face of failure, over IQ, and extracurricular activities are an excellent catalyst for improvements in these areas.

Modern-day educational

Research

·         For EQ

·         in the face

·         of failure

·         in these

·         for improvement

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the face of failure, over IQ, and extracurricular activities

11.

As children debate, speak publicly and work together as a team, they develop empathy, which is the crux of succeeding in adult life.

They

Develop

·         The crux of succeeding

·         in adult

they develop empathy

As children debate, speak publicly and work together as a team

children debate, speak publicly and work together as a team

12.

Besides broadening their perspectives, experiential learning opportunities also boost self—esteem.

Their prespectives

Broadening

Besides broadening

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experiential learning opportunities also boost self—esteem.

13.

These eye-opening experiences endow young people with a sense of belonging, which is fortified by a web of close friendships among schoolmates who are sharing the same experiences

These

Eye-opening

·         With a sense

·         of belonging

·         by a web

·         of close

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-

-

14.

We all excel with different styles of learning.

We

Learning

We all excel with different styles of learning

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We all excel with different styles of learning

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15.

It's undeniable that different people do better in different academic subjects too, which is why students must be exposed to a variety of fields.

It

Is

·         In different

·         to a variety of fields

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16.

Introducing your student or child to a broad spread of activities also enables them to discover where their interests and strengths lie a student struggling with academic subjects may become the world's next motor racing champion, or the maths whiz discovers a passion for drama.

Student or child

To

·         of activities

·         to discover

·         for drama

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-

·         Student or child

·         Interests and strengths

·         Motor racing champion or the math whiz

17.

Exercise re-energises the mind before indoor classes and studying resumes.

The mind

Before

Before indoor classes

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Indoor classes and studying resumes

18.

Students who exercise frequently have been found to enjoy good mental health, which wards off common conditions like depression and anxiety.

Students who exercise frequently

Have been

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Depression and anxiety

19.

Cut students a break from mundanity and watch them uncover lessons that are not or cannot be taught in the classroom.

Students

Break

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-

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not or cannot

20.

Extracurricular activities also help limit TV, computer and smartphone screen time.

Extracurricular activities

Help

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TV, computer and smartphone

21.

Nowadays, many schools organise trips locally, regionally and internationally.

School

Organise

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locally, regionally and internationally.

22.

These trips offer many advantages including exposure to different cultures, becoming independent, socialising with peers outside of school and learning new things, especially in themed (language, business, geography) trips.

These trips

Offer

Peers outside of school

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-

exposure to different cultures, becoming independent, socialising with peers outside of school and learning new things

23.

Besides trips, outdoor activities and camping have been found to instil confidence and to encourage children to try new experiences.

Children

To try

·         to instil

·         to encourage children

·         to try new experiences.

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trips, outdoor activities and camping

24.

Activities like hiking, swimming, cycling, kayaking and just being close to nature is good for health, and allows children to be free, learn life skills and bond with their friends outside the confines of a classroom.

Activites

Hiking, swimming, cycling, kayaking

·         close to nature is good for health

·         the confines of a classroom.

·         bond with their friends outside

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just being close to nature is good for health, and allows children to be free, learn life skills and bond with their friends outside the confines of a classroom.

25.

Don't hold your children back from the multitude of soft skills that extracurricular activities can help them harness.

Your chlidren

Back

From the multitude

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26.

Research has proven that traits like problem-solving, teamwork and public speaking are far more important in adult life than straight As and book smarts.

Research

Has

more important in adult life than straight As and book smarts.

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Problem-solving, teamwork, and public speaking

27.

A varied spread of accomplishments and experiences makes for an impressive university application and résumé, and eventually an accomplished adult.

A varied spread

Makes

accomplishments and experiences makes for an impressive university

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Accomplishments and experiences

 

Essential Education